Congratulations on winning Stormy's poetry contest with this poem. You've done a great job here with beautiful, evocative description and wonderful use of the prompt words.
I just spotted one slight error. You write 'Charcoals' but need to lose the s on the end for it to make sense grammatically.
Apart from that this is great and worthy of the win.
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