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 The Ode Master Writes  [18+]
Prompt Words: chalk, lines, handwriting, frightened, paper, smoke, blows, marked
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

Congratulations on winning Stormy's poetry contest with this poem. You've done a great job here with beautiful, evocative description and wonderful use of the prompt words.

I just spotted one slight error. You write 'Charcoals' but need to lose the s on the end for it to make sense grammatically.

Apart from that this is great and worthy of the win.

Look forward to reading more of your work soon.

Best wishes,
Mark


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