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Hello Kurt Philip Behm

I love the play on original sin with the title of this poem. The literary references are great too. How do we come up with anything original as writers following such heritage. I guess all we can do really is stay true to our own voices (while acknowledging those who went before), and express our unique perspective in the hope of turning the familiar into the unfamiliar.

I found this poem thought provoking as a writer. It also has a polished feel to it and your words flow well. Great job with this.

Didn't spot any errors and I feel it totally deserves a maximum 5 stars.

Best wishes,
Mark


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