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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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This is a nice poem. The poetry conveys a feeling of familiarity of the actions being said. The idea of the poetry makes us feel good. Travesty is stated as a person and this makes it a enigma to be explored. The wobbliness of the abandonee is a term that should be appreciated. The disarray is another point that makes us feel love is not a game. The talk is no more and so there is the walkaway. There should be more of an effort to write with greater meaning.

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