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The poetry is nice to read. Zeke is made out a store robbing turtle. The character crafted and chosen should be appreciated. It will bring a smile to readers mind. Boss box could have been explained more. Deploying a frogman is another good idea to hunt for the turtle. The last lines written in zigzag fashion are a mystery, but adds to the fun of the poetry.

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