I am also reviewing this item because it popped-up on the Random Review click. I am so happy this one came up, too.

As you know, I have read some of your stories about Linda, your deep love for her and your loss of her because of her epilepsy. It used to break my heart to read about her illness, because it made me worry so much about my own daughter, who also has epilepsy.

You've corresponded with me, many times in fact, to let me know how different and better the treatments are for epilepsy, these days.

This story again, brought tears to my eyes. I know how much your faith has be a huge part of yours and Linda's life. Here, you bring the mystery of faith alive as well as the deep love, to your reader. I felt as if I knew you and her, personally.


Observations:

You remember those few times you and Linda told Ginny and I [me] about how the two of you were so close to Him that you had been ‘Baptized in the Spirit’,..."


"Well, Ginny and I were both a little skeptical. Her She" more than me."

It would also be a good idea to write out most of the numbers that you have in this story. They can become distracting and take away from the story. It is such a beautiful painting of words, highlighting a time of terrible tragedy, yet, also a time enveloped in the spirit of unwavering faith.

You've kept her spirit alive, and did a remarkable job in this tribute of her, and what she stood for, her belief in Him, and precious love of you!

You last responded to this review 03/05/2017 @ 9:01pm EST

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