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F-A-I-L-U-R-E  [13+]
An entry for the "A Moment in Time" contest, Feb. round.
by Professor Q
Review of F-A-I-L-U-R-E  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, Professor Q
This is a Simply Positive Review! *RainbowL*


*Bird* I am also reviewing this item because it popped-up on the Random Review click.

*FlipFlops3* You've captured the anticipation and nervousness of a spelling competition. The young girl, could be pictured in the reader's mind, as via the description of her appearance. Do I remember patent leather shoes, and the cool click of them on wooden surfaces! Very cute.

*Faucet* I felt for her as she had spelled a tough word, and stood on stage with two more contestants left in their seats.

*Watch* This time, however, she failed to spell the word. Her emotions dropped to a lower level as she could feel "failure" nagging at the pit of her stomach.

*CheckP* Loved the ending, as it added surprise -- a little twist, if you will, because third place still gets you to the National Spellings Bees to compete.

Nice! *BoxCheckB*

*Stop* I had to change the rating on this item due to the word codeine. Since it is a narcotic, it needs to be placed in at least a 13+ content rating.

Otherwise, well done and reminiscent of school days, way back when. *TeaV*

Until next time--write on!
Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*

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