*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4302816
Review #4302816
Viewing a review of:
 Dreams in the Moon  [13+]
Arabian Sonnet
by Arlais
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Right off I love the way you did the wrap around sentence, but so the rhyme part is right on. Good going.

This poem is so absolutely great. I don't give fives very often, but this one deserves it.

You drew me in and held my rapt attention. You used great word choices, great imagery and made me fall in love in you short four verses.

Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn
This signature accompanies my review of your writing.
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4302816