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Given: Feb 26, 2017 at 7:05pm
Length: 611 Characters |
611 w/o WritingML
A poem at the time when nation is divided. the unsafe nation is not like it meant to be. How to avoid violence?when violence is non stoppable , there is no solution on hand, deciding the helpless human all over. The message of love is useful but how to teach them is the question. the one who tries by example is surrounded by fear of own safety. no neighborhood is safe anymore crime scenes are everywhere, no race, color matter the new administration is adding fuel to the crime rate. The flow of the poem is good, with rhyming scheme throuout.
A good read,
Jaya H.
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