A free verse runs more like a prose than poem. The love of the god is filtered through every line.The surrender to his feet is so complete that no other world is visible. for him to accept is the prime goal in this poem with a strong belief in him is enough to live this life. the poetic prose is by choice or it just happened? it is clear with the message and flow is good if not to wordy, the poem with a few words would have been more powerful but at the same time the expression carries through the long words.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.