Hi 💙 Carly ,

I am reviewing your item today for the I Write contest.

I'm not a huge fan of free verse, but I really liked this. You've made nice use of consonance and assonance throughout your poem, and that really appeals to me.

The opening of your poem captures the splendid display of a vibrant dawn. I like the way how you contrast all the promises of the new day with leaving the previous day behind.

Wishing you the very best of luck in Shadows and Light. I hope you have enjoyed this round of I Write.

Thank you for sharing this item! Please keep on writing!

Andy~hating university


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