Hello, theoldwolf How are you doing today? I'm working on reviewing different genres for "Invalid Item"  and stumbled upon your item, "Invalid Item" . I hope this review finds you well! Thanks for sharing your writing with us.

General Thoughts: I love reading autobiographical blogs and I think it's really good idea to document your transition, be it physical or mental, as well as your life in general. I think there's definitely an underrepresented population on WDC that could benefit from reading about the process and also your thoughts along with it.

I read the three entries you've made so far. I loved the titles. I figured laser hair removal would be pretty painful. Thanks for letting us know which spots to use in case we ever want to torture information from someone. It's always good to have that information, ya know, just in case.

It sounds like your job is extremely busy and stressful. Those long days have to be super rough. 16 hours? Working until 3 in the morning and then waking up at six? I don't know exactly what it is that you do, but clearly something within the military, given the opening to your blog. Very interesting stuff. I hope it leaves time for you to blog!


Suggestions: Well, can we get an update? Seriously, with the hours you work, it must be difficult, but I'd be interested in reading more entries now that I'm aware of the blogs existence.

The only other suggestions are things that will come with time. You know, sprucing the place up with WritingML, links, etc... Usually you get more into that the more you blog, so it's not really expected in the first few entries.


Conclusion: I think you could generate a lot of interest in your autobiographical blog. I'll definitely be a reader, although you might have to poke me and let me know if/when you've updated. Thanks again for sharing with us!


Best wishes,

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