Hi Coral Boucher,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal and filled with joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a special place of yours-a gorgeous brook. The reader can envision the beauty of the place as they read. They will read to the last word. The free verse works well in the poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a lovely rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.






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