Hello, Mari McKee!

I'm offering you this review in celebration of Earth Day, which is marked on the 22^nd April every year, and on behalf of "The Earth Day Challenge" 

Thank you for being aware of our planet and the environment.

What I liked

I think this is a really great take on the old "the world is a stage" metaphor. I love to see Winter and Spring together on that stage and acting out the transition from winter to spring.

What might need work

A few minor concerns:

the curtains arise, - this line kinda literally means that the curtains were pooled on the floor and then they stood up by themselves. I think you mean, "the curtains rise".

Spring and winter meet center stage. - you capitalised Spring to emphasise your personification, but why not Winter?

The audience arises, yelling “Bravo”, - use standard punctuation for speech, ie. yelling, "Bravo."

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob






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