Hello!

It's been awhile since we've talked, but I saw this in the please review thread and thought that I would, well, review

I'm not sure about the meter, but I also don't feel like I am well versed enough in poetry to comment on that. What I did like (loved, actually) was the tone of the poem. This is a very interesting subject matter and the way that the piece is written just seems to fit that perfectly.

I also really like how the narrative slowly builds up to that final line, which of course mirrors the title of the poem. It wasn't overstated and I think it really tied everything together perfectly.

This is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it, and I wish you all the best in submitting for publication.

Sincerely,


-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .