Hello!

I found this in the review request thread and thought that I would stop by.

I'm glad that there was the note about the meter in the request thread so that I knew a little bit more what I should expect going in, and what you were going for with this poem.

Auras (in my opinion) are a good topic for poetry - and I think you've done really well with that topic here. It was beautiful, it called on a lot of natural imagery, and even though this isn't structured in any traditional poetic form, it reads like a poem.

Thank you for sharing your work - and I wish you the best of luck in getting the sort of feedback you're after, whatever that may be.

All the best,



-Cat









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