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Hello!

I found this in the review request thread and thought that I would give it a read and leave my notes.

I thought that this was a beautifully written poem with, overall, a very good message. I like that it was written from a sort of unique, second person perspective where you address the abuser as a third party, rather than as his victim. It made it stand out from a lot of poems/stories that I've read that cover these sorts of themes.

I wish you all the best in getting the feedback you're looking for with this piece, as well as with your future writing endeavors.

Sincerely


-Cat


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