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 A Heavenly Throne  [E]
God's love gives the utmost strength - a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review of A Heavenly Throne  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Tim Chiu
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Sun*

*BowlingPin* I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the Random Review generator.

*Vignette2* This was such a lovely poem about the strength we can get when we count on our faith in our Heavenly Father. I felt the joy and truth within your words.

*TulipY* There was a serenity to reading the words, which also make a reader pause and take a moment to reflect upon the lines. You make the reader believe that you are a very spiritual person who does believe and receives the strength that you have woven into this poem within each line.

*Vignette2* This is a very inspirational free verse -- almost a whisper of a prayer of thanks can be felt from reading it. The flow for the most part was smooth and easy in its rhythm. Structured rhyme was not a factor, thus the free verse inference.


My favorite part:

"The fruitful clock ticks
Each precious and solitary moment
With mesmerizing depth and quality,
As folks proceed on this fateful and inspiring journey"

Beautiful! *ButterflyO*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*

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