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Hello there, screw
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Cat*


*MushroomV* I am also reviewing this item because it popped up on the Random Review generator.

*ShirtV* This was quite the clever little plot you put together. It will interest young readers as it has a couple young friends on a scavenger hunt. Who doesn't like those? Well, the bored soccer moms, I guess weren't interested.
*Laugh*

*Ball* I like the play on words as the key clue to finding the last item on the list of treasures to be turned-in. Kudos to them, that they were first to uncover the secret, which in fact was the color of the cover of a book, a book that they had read.
*Wink*

Observation:

"We're on a scavenger hunt with her apartment building." [within]

*Cool* I see that this is a series you are developing with these two characters in the "Annie" stories. It reminded me of a time, way long ago, when I read The Bobbsey Twins. I enjoyed them very much. This sounded like something they would get involved in, although I do not remember the series plots so much, anymore. I do remember they were by the sea at one time.
*Laugh*

Good job! *Witchlegs1*

Until next time--write on!

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WebWitch *Witch*



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