This is a nice story. It is written with imagination and skill. Yassin and Varu are two characters that have been made out well. The revelation they have is exotic but it is very real. A woman riding on a tiger with a giant has a touch of fantasy to it. How the tiger kills Yassin is to be explained. The tiger has two people riding on it. How it jumps on him and slays him has to be explained. The scene of the tiger and its occupants wets Yassin's pants. The climax is brutal but interesting. It has a violent end.
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