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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am reading the entries listed in the archives of the Fluffy Unicorn event! CongratMOOlations on your win!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* As someone who has been bullied in life and on the internet, I can readily identify with your wonderful unicorn protagonist. I think anyone who has been pushed around by mean herd members will be able to see their own struggle in this fine poem.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part as it brought a tear to my eye and a sniff to my nostrils:

"Mocked by others for his shading
And clunky silver hooves
He tried his best to measure up
Despite his clumsy moves"

There is a lot of heart in anyone who keeps trying, no matter how many times they are excluded from lists or put down.

Wonderful poetry! Bravo on the win!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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