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Review #4322149
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Post Office Therapy  [13+]
Cramp Winner: Gary and Lucas are stuck.
by Than Pence
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I gave the prompt in "The Writer's Cramp, earlier in the week. I was not the judge, but I wanted to read what you writers did with my prompt.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This is a story about friends, stuck inside a post office. They seem to be at each other from the beginning, but an unusual thing happens over the course of an evening's time.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I like how being stuck like this forced both of them to take a long look at their own behavior and their relationship. It was interesting to see that what might have divided them further only brought them closer.

Very fine story! I thought the dialogue was great and I enjoyed reading it very much!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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