Post Office Therapy [13+] Cramp Winner: Gary and Lucas are stuck. |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I gave the prompt in "The Writer's Cramp" , earlier in the week. I was not the judge, but I wanted to read what you writers did with my prompt. What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? This is a story about friends, stuck inside a post office. They seem to be at each other from the beginning, but an unusual thing happens over the course of an evening's time. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I like how being stuck like this forced both of them to take a long look at their own behavior and their relationship. It was interesting to see that what might have divided them further only brought them closer. Very fine story! I thought the dialogue was great and I enjoyed reading it very much! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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