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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I gave the prompt for this in "The Writer's Cramp"  earlier in the week. Although I was not the judge, I was interested to see what you writers would do with the prompt.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* There is a lot of intrigue in writing surrounding phone booths. Being stuck in one would be claustrophobic, but I miss them when the cell phone reception is feeble and the battery is on its last gasp.

This made me think of Dr. Who also and the Tardis.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part because I could picture it all happening Keystone Cops style:

"From my pocket I pulled a forgotten last dime
I called 911 (though this was no crime)
I banged on the glass like a con doing time
The cops came and left! They thought me a mime!"

I wish they would bring back phone booths and make it a dime again. Would that be so terrible to do that.

Nice poem!


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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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