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 The Specter of the Lake:Chapter 2  [E]
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by Daft Punk
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This is a nice story about Leena's ability to see ghosts at hospitals and cemeteries. The story makes us take a look at paranormal phenomena. Her wanting to write a history of the lake adds to her experiences. The text should be checked again for English and Grammar. Leena knows Mitchell but denies having seen her after she sees his ghost. The story is interesting. Her interactions with her family makes it more interesting. The author has a good touch of fiction. The story reminds us of other paranormal and ghost stories we have read.

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