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 Many-Eyed  [13+]
The Khmer Rouge have a new way to keep track of their citizens.
by slowmotionsunset
Review of Many-Eyed  
Review by Cat Voleur
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am not a professional editor or critic. All the opinions in the following review are just that; opinions.


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Hello!

I found this poem in the review request thread and thought that it would be worth dropping by to give it a read, although I am not particularly well-versed in poetry.

Although I wasn't immediately sold on the poetic form, I quickly came to like the poem. The quote at the beginning (thank you by the way, for citing that so well and putting this piece into some context for your audience) really set the tone.

What I liked best about the piece was definitely the eerie, somewhat disturbing imagery.

And now hang with little eye-nooses threaded through
Not unlike their former hosts bodies strung up


^^ Very vivid.

Thank you for sharing your work, and I hope that this was at least somewhat helpful. Best of luck with this and any of your other writing endeavors.

Sincerely,

-Cat


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