Hello!

I found this in the review request thread and thought that I would drop in to leave you with my notes.

This was a cute little read - although it did fill me with a strange guilt about all of the flies I have ever swatted at

In all seriousness though, I liked that you wrote this story from a different perspective, and that it maintained a light-hearted, fun tone despite SPOILER WARNING ▼ It was a fun read, and really good for what it was.

I guess it's just because my personal preferences often lead me to darker fiction, but it was actually pretty refreshing to read something that wasn't overly-serious and so I really want to thank you for sharing this. I had a good time reading it.

I hope that this review was, if nothing else, somewhat encouraging if not particularly helpful. I really did enjoy the piece.

Best of luck in obtaining reviews for this, and with any future writing projects you may have.

Sincerely



-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .