Hello!

I saw this in the review request thread, and even though I don't know a lot about poetry from a technical standpoint, it is something that I have been reading more of lately, so I thought this might be a good thing to review.

Let me start by saying I liked the individual poems quite a bit. I like that the theme of the collection gravitates toward the dark - that's something that I enjoy more just on a personal level and I liked seeing it in these poems.

I do think that there were some grammatical/technical issues in a couple of the poems themselves - though again, I'm not poetry expert so I might have definitely been wrong on that.

The only real suggestion that I have for you on the book item as a whole, would be to include an introduction. Although it was kind of cool that you used a part of one of the poems to fill in that section above the entries list, I think it also would have been cool to have the collection put into some context for the reader. I would have liked to know a little more about the poems, the collection, or even just you as a writer.

That aside though, I think you're off to a great start. I hope that you continue being able to work on these and expand this collection.

All the best,





-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .