Hello!

I thought that I would review this - I've been going through the review request thread all day and this is one that I've been seeing around for awhile in the thread and on my dashboard.

I thought it was really interesting. I'm not sure that I got it entirely, but I kind of liked the vague nature in which parts of it (the first few lines in particular) were written. It made for a sort of mysterious tone that I think definitely added something to the piece overall.

There was one line in particular that I really liked:



I thought that this was a really good message, and it's the one very distinct thing I was able to latch onto throughout the course of the piece.

I hope that this was at least somewhat helpful/encouraging. The poem was quite interesting, and I did enjoy it - so thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best with it, and with your other works.

Sincerely,

-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .