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Forgive me  [E]
For Edwin Morey
by ~WhoMe???~
Review of Forgive me  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I often read in The Writer's Cramp and I was struck and immediately engaged by the title of your poem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This is a poem about one of the worst things there is and that is living with regret. I think that those we love and who love us would forgive us anything if the feelings are genuine. That's just the way love is.

We have to find it in us to forgive ourselves because none of us in perfect in our reactions to hard times.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part at the beginning was the part that sticks with me:

"I couldn't go,
I refused to.
It was selfish of me
I know.
I wouldn't bring myself,
to remember you
like so."

We all choose how to remember those we love, I think. Going to one of those services (which I have trouble with too) usually has nothing to do with the person or the life that is gone. It's like a separate entity in and of itself. It helps some people and others, not so much. My Dad always refused to go along with a lot of that and he was scolded by a bunch of his sisters over it.

I think we all find our way when there is a loss, in our own time.

Brilliant poem - well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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