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The Hunter  [13+]
Flash Fiction of a possible hunting accident
by W.D.Wilcox
Review of The Hunter  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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willwilcox

Oh what a chuckle and grin I had reading this story. As of late, it seems I know the endings of movies, books and stories, before they happen and this one...well this one left me hanging, wondering if I was right or not. This is such the story, it could be used to test character. You could use this as a teaching tool, have the classroom finish off the story letting the reader know how it ended. The answers alone would give a bit of the character of the writer.

I like how this leaves the reader to decide what had happened. This is well written and I didn't find anything technical or otherwise to distract me, not even the snoring I now hear in the other room from another professed hunter.



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