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 Describing Women  [E]
Describing a woman without saying, "she, her, woman, female, girl."
by W.D.Wilcox
Review of Describing Women  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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willwilcox

Funny how the read and review button pulled you up two times in a row. It must like your writing style as much as I do. This time it pulled up a poem. I must say you have used some words here that I found myself running to look up. This was like describing the scent of a rose and you seem to have done just that, in a sense.

This may be free style poetry, or have a format of origin I know not of, it matters not to me. I did find the centered poem to help illustrate the curves of the beauty being described.

Another well written piece free of anything noticeable to bring up as far as technical or grammatical issue.

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