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 Growing Up  [13+]
But I keep the nursery windows open, even still....
by fyn
Review of Growing Up  
Review by ~WhoMe???~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Did find it fit
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to review for it.

I selected
random read
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You were it.


HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO THE BESTEST OF BEST.
What a great visual you have created with this wonderful Poem of Pan and his world. With short verse and centered line you shower us with chaos as you show how the world has corrupted Pan and this is a wake up call for him to find NEVER NEVERLAND again.

Very creative and a joy to read. Thank you once again my friend.


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