Your poem is nicely done. You drew me in and held my attention with the descriptive words. The breaking the rules part made me smile. I'm not sure what rules flowers have.

Your brilliant color, vibrant reds bursting yellows and explode all in one to line verse is great.

As a painter I also liked the 'spreading color like a paintbrush'. The other verses are good as well, but using the word 'explode' was a nice touch.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Love, LinnAnn