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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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This is a nice poetry. It is written with creativity and imagination. The tenures at the different places of employment and the perks that are given out makes us think about our own employment. It makes us think about the perks employers hand out to employees and how they cherish them. The five oven buns repeat at many of the employment places. This adds to the mystery of the poetry. The nights in Paris, leering looks, dinner and a raise are also something to look forward to. The poetry compares the terms of employment with the twelve days of Christmas.

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