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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You have sent me a very nice review, so I am reading and reviewing in your portfolio.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that all of us get to the point where we want to escape at times. Maybe we do it and travel, or maybe just do it in our heads. I think a lot of readers will readily identify with this urge to be free.

I noticed one small typo, with spelling the word, "genie". That was the only thing I saw to mention there.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Gimme a ticket for an airplane!
One that flies by right when i need it!
Every road is blocked and whose to blame?
I don't have time for this unexpected shame!"

I like the notion of setting blame aside. There is too much of that going on in the world, in my opinion.

Nice poem of facing a fork in the road and having to choose whether to stay the course of flee the jurisdiction.

Nice work!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 05/13/2017 @ 11:15am EDT
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