A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I gave the prompt for this (the quotation from Muhammad Ali) earlier in the week. I was not the judge, but I was interested in reading the entries to see what you writers would do with my prompt. What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? I was transported back in time to school days when I anxiously awaited the weekend, for entirely different reasons as I was somewhat bullied in school. The weekends were a welcome break, usually. What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I like how the weekend didn't turn out the way she anticipated. Having that quotation come via a mysterious email was very inspired writing. In school it did always seem like the group would get punished severely for the bad acts of a few. Sorry to hear that still goes on. I guess that's humans for you, doing that. I don't think it works really and only serves to confuse the issues. I enjoyed your story very much - well done! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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