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How exciting to view life through the mind and eyes of one who soars the skies!

I find aeronautics to be fascinating! What keeps those heavy objects in the air? I've heard it explained and d understand the concept -- but nevertheless, it's simply wonderful.

Observations:

"Wings cold as steel flying high the sun gleams off it's shinning [shining] form."

"It's [its, possessive, not the contraction of it is.] wings look heavy but hide a secret."

The poem was a short one, thus little typos or grammar errors like this tend to stick out more, thus slowing down the flow of the piece. What the reader wants to take away, is the spirit and freedom of a person in flight, plus the awesome space and adventure ahead. Thus, with a little edit, this will soar high.

The flow was smooth and easy with a cloud bump in the travel.

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