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by A Guest Visitor
Review of Silhouettes  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I have to tell you, for a teeny tiny poem, you really caught and held my attention. You gave good imagery. I could really see a shattered window, maybe white lace curtains blowing in a breeze, the glass all over the sidewalk.

I found it interesting you used sympathy but not in English. Was there a reason for that? It made me think of Haley Mills' friend in 'Trouble with Angels'. I love the 'nay' so old world ish. The last line broke my heart.

Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn
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