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 The Morning After  [13+]
Very short poem with a nice "twist".
by Island Gorilla
Review of The Morning After  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Okay, I liked your 'twist'. ROFLOL Now, if you were an assassin wouldn't you wash your hands before going to sleep? Or were you sleep walking/murdering? This could be a great story. I love it. Made me laugh big time. Okay, critique time. (giggle)
It was short, to the point, held my attention and pulled me in. I loved the laughter.

Thanks so much for sharing your short poem. If I knew how to award something I would. (still laughing)
love, LinnAnn

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