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Darkness and Light  [E]
Short poem of light and darkness and the emotions which surround them.
by SB Musing
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Your first verse didn't rhyme but your second verse did, three in a row. Was that on purpose? You got me to thinking about the light v/s dark and not give you both. I wouldn't want only darkness. It would be so heartbreaking.

Poetry is known best to the writer, we the readers can only interpret through out own minds and hearts. Just in case this is a real feeling, I hope you only have light then.

This was a very thought provoking poem. You drew me in and made me pause to think and feel.

Thanks for sharing this with us.
Love, LinnAnn

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