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Given: May 22, 2017 at 4:37pm
Length: 564 Characters |
559 w/o WritingML
Your first verse didn't rhyme but your second verse did, three in a row. Was that on purpose? You got me to thinking about the light v/s dark and not give you both. I wouldn't want only darkness. It would be so heartbreaking.
Poetry is known best to the writer, we the readers can only interpret through out own minds and hearts. Just in case this is a real feeling, I hope you only have light then.
This was a very thought provoking poem. You drew me in and made me pause to think and feel.
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