If the passion is unbridled, then it's not concealed. Just thought I would mention that.
You smallest opening, then paired with 'burst through' was well done. To have the two opposites in the same line, sort of a yin yang (not sure if I said that right) kind of thing.

Flickering appears is a tantalizing line, short and powerful.

Then you break our hearts with the torn apart.

Mourning from the /a distance. There is a subtle difference and I wasn't sure if 'the' is what you wanted. Mourning the distance, or mourning the person at a distance.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn