I really can empathize with your first two lines. It's so much nicer when you can get suggestions instead of criticism.

The next two lines of your poem definitely sounds like a woman who is insecure. It drew me in and made me feel. It also made me want to read more.

The next two lines gave a hint and the next to the last line makes the reader anxious for the writer and her needs.

Then the last line seems to have the happy ending we were all waiting for. I take it the writer was reassured of their love. Did I get it right?
Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Love, LinnAnn