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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC Wanderer! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Wand* Wow! This is a moving romantic expression which I found so appealing. The free style suits the emotional content and your verses have a similar pattern. I like how each one speaks to a different element with vibrant images and they all end with the last line. That each one of the elements in the beloved is profound and sweet too. *Heart*

*Wand*The poem was coherent and only one spot threw me off a bit. In verse 2: I wondered if it should say "taught me to breathe" unless you mean "breathe to a suffocated heart" as is---yet I am not really sure I get this part. I wondered if "from a suffocated.."? A little confused but the concept of expansion is clear. *Wink*

*Star*I felt this was very touching and evocative. A wonderful response to the Media prompt, if that prompted the write! *Wink*

*Quill* Thanks for sharing your vision and craft! Write on *Star*!
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