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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC Dartagnan! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Horse* Wow! I like westerns and horses so this was an appealing poem. It was fun to read with its vivid images of the life of a cowboy. You captured this one man's viewpoint effectively right down to the stoic tone.

*Horseshoe* The form seems to be quatrains with specific rhyme scheme and flow. The lines are not even in rhythm or syllable count but it did not detract from the message. I kinda liked the lines that speeded up the pace by being shorter. The tricky lines to read with understanding were the first two in verse 3. *Wink* I assume these names refer to certain job positions. I wanted to take out the "then" before "flank" and put a comma instead and maybe a comma after "point man" to indicate a pause before defining it.

*Horse* The vocabulary fit the theme well and the use of some poetic devices like alliteration and consonsance, and rhyme added to the overall flow. The narrative voice made it a trip down memory lane as you take us into his younger life. The point of view was consistent to the end. *Thumbsup*

*Wind*I enjoyed entering into this vivid vision and could sense the cowboy's feeling about what he did in his life. Thanks for sharing your craft! Write on! *Starstruck*

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