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 Home  [13+]
You may think of bricks and mortar as being a home, but a home is where your heart is.
by ivyrose
Review of Home  
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC Ivyrose! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Delight*Your short piece popped up on Read and Review today. The title is simple and fits the theme perfectly.

*Wand*Your three line free style expression has a heart felt sentiment revealing your sincere definition of home! I liked the imagery of the two "essences" of home and you capture the physical, emotional and spiritual elements. *Smile*

*Wand*Your tagline gives away your message in too much detail I think as you use similar words to your poem. *Wink* In the second line I wanted to say "the most" though it does make it wordy.
I wonder if Philosophy might also be a genre tag as it feels like a piece of wisdom. I am not sure it is a chapter. *Smile* I can see how you could expand on this with vivid examples.

Thanks for sharing your vision and congrats on posting your first item here! *Starstruck* Keep on writing.

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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