Hello!

I found this in the review request thread and thought that I'd read it and see if I could help come up with a title for you.

Before I get into titles or anything though, I just wanted to tell you that I really liked your story. It was gripping, the atmosphere was wonderful, and even though I could see the end coming, it was still powerful. I know that you said you're not great at descriptions, but I thought there was a good balance worked in here throughout the story - enough that I could get a clear picture, but not so much that I was focusing more on the words than on the situation.

As for titles, I imagine that it would be hard to title this one. The first things that came to mind were "A Dry One" or "Told You." I'll admit, neither is great in terms of drawing people in, but they both highlight two different focal points of the story.

Sorry I wasn't more help with the naming, but I hope that the review was at least somewhat helpful in giving perspective, and that you get an awesome name for this story soon. It deserves it.

All the best,



-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .