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 Review #4327067 |
 Welcome to WDCya Lizzy! Your poem popped up on Read and Review tab today so I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!  Yay! Good for you on entering the Cramp contest!  I enjoyed reading your short poem. I like how you tied the prompt to a relationship! The experience of not wanting to be heart broken is one many can relate to!   I was abit confused as in the beginning you had not taken the call but it seems like at the end you found out what the matter was. I wnated to know what is ok for a start---the not taking the call? And then you change your mind.?  The last line was a bit confusing too. I like the tone and vibe of confusion though as we do at times assume things! The poem has a steady rhyme scheme which helped with the flow of the free form poem.  Thanks for sharing your vision and craft at WDC.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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