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 Review #4327090 |
 | Pisces's Son  [13+] A poem about something that never was.  |
| (4.5)  Hiya C.O.! Your poem popped up on Read and Review tab today so I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!   Wow! This is an evocative expression with a potent voice. The images are vivid and stark as you describe the experience. Using symbols like Pisces, "mars", "current", "paper-machier" and "life long synapse" is brilliant!  I really felt sad for the speaker as you reveal the effects of addiction. You capture the essence well. Active verbs like "smashed", "swung" and "glued" added to the vibrancy and drama of the pictures. The free verse style suited the content and emotional intensity of the piece as well. I was confused a bit by "be my morning".   Amazing free flow poem that kept my attention to the end and a well conceived creation that I found original!  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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