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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I gave the prompt earlier in the week in The Writer's Cramp. I wanted to see what all you writers have done with my Hemingway quote as I was curious to read.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that your poem is very consistent with the origin of the quote. Hemingway was feeling sad in the spring that particular year and found it to be an unexpected bit of timing.

I especially liked your description and the fact that you used the quotation as the title.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"but no one writes melancholy
in crisp summer mornings
and dreadful winter nights"

I think it is haunting and memorable. So many things in life are temporary or fleeting, like the seasons and the feelings that come or don't come. You have written a fine poem and that is a positive that no one can take away.

Well done!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such


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