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Hi, I just read your poem, 'A Soul Redeemed' and wanted to share my thoughts.

I love the theme and the statement that this poem makes. Forgiving yourself for your past mistakes is the hardest part of all, believe I know that all too well.

The rhyme and rhythm of this poem are really good, it flows easily and holds the reader's attention to the end.

The only error I found was in the second to the last line - it self - should be itself.

I am glad I took the time to read this today, thank you for sharing this with the community!

Karen
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