Hi, I just read your poem, 'A Soul Redeemed' and wanted to share my thoughts. I love the theme and the statement that this poem makes. Forgiving yourself for your past mistakes is the hardest part of all, believe I know that all too well. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem are really good, it flows easily and holds the reader's attention to the end. The only error I found was in the second to the last line - it self - should be itself. I am glad I took the time to read this today, thank you for sharing this with the community! Karen "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
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