House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Rescue of Brunel

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with men being fragile things. In this exciting story Elizabeth and Arthur rescue the engineer who seem a little befuddled about what is going on around him.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that need attention.

What part I liked best: I like the metaphors and similes used in this story because they are fresh and expressive. I especially like this metaphor, the diplomatic language of clothes. I also like the double entendres the author used in this story.

Overall impression: The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense while revealing the characters personalities. Elizabeth A'colti is a strong and independent woman that the reader can sympathize with. Major Arthur Packett is an intriguing character whose weaknesses are obvious and this makes him a sympathetic character. Brunel is intriguing without being either sympathetic or unsympathetic. I am giving this exciting story a 5.0 because it it kept my entire attention. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .